Poem: Clean Sweep

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This week’s Poet’s Corner contribution is from John Neylon of Adelaide.

Wednesday October 09, 2019

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Clean Sweep

On coming up Shepherds Hill Road, having
bought a carpet square at Bunnings for the garage

At the corner of my eye
an old woman was sweeping leaves
in her driveway
Bent over
so low
I thought her hair would touch the ground
Not moving
Still as a statue
Like a monument
to all little old ladies
who after reading the death notices
in the daily paper
go out and sweep the autumn leaves away
There’s nothing quite like
a clean sweep
to start the day.

John Neylon is an Adelaide-based art writer, artist and curator and currently lectures in contemporary art history at Adelaide Central School of Art. He is the author of numerous essays and several books on South Australian artists including Robert Hannaford, Greg Johns and Hans Heysen. He is the inaugural art critic for “The Adelaide Review” and writes regularly for that publication.

Readers’ original and unpublished poems of up to 40 lines can be emailed, with postal address, to poetscorner@solsticemedia.com.au. Submissions should be in the body of the email, not as attachments. A poetry book will be awarded to each accepted contributor.

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<h1>Poem: Clean Sweep</h1>

<p><p>This week’s <em>Poet’s Corner</em> contribution is from John Neylon of Adelaide.</p>
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							<h2><a href="#clean-sweep" aria-hidden="true" class="aal_anchor" id="clean-sweep"><svg aria-hidden="true" class="aal_svg" height="16" version="1.1" viewBox="0 0 16 16" width="16"><path fill-rule="evenodd" d="M4 9h1v1H4c-1.5 0-3-1.69-3-3.5S2.55 3 4 3h4c1.45 0 3 1.69 3 3.5 0 1.41-.91 2.72-2 3.25V8.59c.58-.45 1-1.27 1-2.09C10 5.22 8.98 4 8 4H4c-.98 0-2 1.22-2 2.5S3 9 4 9zm9-3h-1v1h1c1 0 2 1.22 2 2.5S13.98 12 13 12H9c-.98 0-2-1.22-2-2.5 0-.83.42-1.64 1-2.09V6.25c-1.09.53-2 1.84-2 3.25C6 11.31 7.55 13 9 13h4c1.45 0 3-1.69 3-3.5S14.5 6 13 6z"></path></svg></a><strong>Clean Sweep</strong></h2>
<h5><a href="#on-coming-up-shepherds-hill-road-havingbought-a-carpet-square-at-bunnings-for-the-garage" aria-hidden="true" class="aal_anchor" id="on-coming-up-shepherds-hill-road-havingbought-a-carpet-square-at-bunnings-for-the-garage"><svg aria-hidden="true" class="aal_svg" height="16" version="1.1" viewBox="0 0 16 16" width="16"><path fill-rule="evenodd" d="M4 9h1v1H4c-1.5 0-3-1.69-3-3.5S2.55 3 4 3h4c1.45 0 3 1.69 3 3.5 0 1.41-.91 2.72-2 3.25V8.59c.58-.45 1-1.27 1-2.09C10 5.22 8.98 4 8 4H4c-.98 0-2 1.22-2 2.5S3 9 4 9zm9-3h-1v1h1c1 0 2 1.22 2 2.5S13.98 12 13 12H9c-.98 0-2-1.22-2-2.5 0-.83.42-1.64 1-2.09V6.25c-1.09.53-2 1.84-2 3.25C6 11.31 7.55 13 9 13h4c1.45 0 3-1.69 3-3.5S14.5 6 13 6z"></path></svg></a><strong><em>On coming up Shepherds Hill Road, having<br />
</em></strong><strong><em>bought a carpet square at Bunnings for the garage</em></strong></h5>
<p>At the corner of my eye<br />
an old woman was sweeping leaves<br />
in her driveway<br />
Bent over<br />
so low<br />
I thought her hair would touch the ground<br />
Not moving<br />
Still as a statue<br />
Like a monument<br />
to all little old ladies<br />
who after reading the death notices<br />
in the daily paper<br />
go out and sweep the autumn leaves away<br />
There’s nothing quite like<br />
a clean sweep<br />
to start the day.</p>
<p><strong><em>John Neylon</em></strong><em> is an Adelaide-based art writer, artist and curator and currently lectures in contemporary art history at Adelaide Central School of Art. He is the author of numerous essays and several books on South Australian artists including Robert Hannaford, Greg Johns and Hans Heysen. He is the inaugural art critic for “The Adelaide Review” and writes regularly for that publication.</em></p>
<h5><a href="#readers-original-and-unpublished-poems-of-up-to-40-lines-can-be-emailed-with-postal-address-to-poetscornersolsticemedia-com-au-submissions-should-be-in-the-body-of-the-email-not-as-attac" aria-hidden="true" class="aal_anchor" id="readers-original-and-unpublished-poems-of-up-to-40-lines-can-be-emailed-with-postal-address-to-poetscornersolsticemedia-com-au-submissions-should-be-in-the-body-of-the-email-not-as-attac"><svg aria-hidden="true" class="aal_svg" height="16" version="1.1" viewBox="0 0 16 16" width="16"><path fill-rule="evenodd" d="M4 9h1v1H4c-1.5 0-3-1.69-3-3.5S2.55 3 4 3h4c1.45 0 3 1.69 3 3.5 0 1.41-.91 2.72-2 3.25V8.59c.58-.45 1-1.27 1-2.09C10 5.22 8.98 4 8 4H4c-.98 0-2 1.22-2 2.5S3 9 4 9zm9-3h-1v1h1c1 0 2 1.22 2 2.5S13.98 12 13 12H9c-.98 0-2-1.22-2-2.5 0-.83.42-1.64 1-2.09V6.25c-1.09.53-2 1.84-2 3.25C6 11.31 7.55 13 9 13h4c1.45 0 3-1.69 3-3.5S14.5 6 13 6z"></path></svg></a>Readers’ original and unpublished poems of up to 40 lines can be emailed, with postal address, to poetscorner@solsticemedia.com.au. Submissions should be in the body of the email, not as attachments. A poetry book will be awarded to each accepted contributor.</h5>
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Clean Sweep

On coming up Shepherds Hill Road, having bought a carpet square at Bunnings for the garage

Readers’ original and unpublished poems of up to 40 lines can be emailed, with postal address, to poetscorner@solsticemedia.com.au. Submissions should be in the body of the email, not as attachments. A poetry book will be awarded to each accepted contributor.

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